What Am I?
You call me fickleYou call me fake
You think I'm one of these people
Who are always on the make
I don't give
I always take
How is it then that our friendship
Has been strong enough not to break?
Far too selfish
Far too self aware
One thing I have never done
Is show those around me any care
Also shallow
And self-centered
I wouldn't know how
I'm definitely unaware
Hurt others feelings
Think life has no meaning
Please tell me then
If there is even a reason
For us to continue?
posted by Jeremy @ 10:47 pm
3 Comments:
We all in self searching...I loved reaing this one
Again, is this about a real incident? Or something imagined.
I like this the varying rhyme in this piece. But I wonder if there is someway to tie it up with a rhyme? The last section seems to break with form a bit. (Just a small point, though).
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